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Awww, this is such a divine story, Nartana, both the story itself and the way you delivered it in the recording. The ending is such a gentle bang, I loved it. The boy is definitely a creator, not a copier!

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Oh--thanks also for your comment on the audio file---did you hear my dog whine at one point? That's when I almost started laughing. :)

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Thank you Amanda. :-) Regarding being a creator, not a copier, do you know, that didn't even occur to me until the final draft? That wasn't my intention at all, my intention was really thinking about how weather affects our state of being--the snow and cold here, vs. the warmth in Cordoba I experienced last year...so fascinating how things take such a different direction when you create something...

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